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Wednesday, July 15, 2009

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My Name is Samir Camacho H. I'm twenty-five year old, I considerer i am a person friendly and smart. I am industrial Engineer I studied in the Libre University 8 year ago. After i studied in the Nort university, Business Logistic. I was Supervivor of production in Industrias Cannon and after Camaguey SA recruits me working like boss of werehouse where i work at the moment.
I'm person quiet i like reading newspaper on internet and doing new proyect about Logistic management, and giving solutions informatic in Microsoft Excel for small business.
I love my Family, my father is the better and my mother too, my mother is a good teacher, and is working in a school in Cienaga City her name is Rosario is a beautiful name. My father likes working a lot, he has a farm in the departmet Cesar there has much animals and crops, My Father names Jorge. I have two brother, Jorge is Doctor he studied in the Libre University 7 years ago, at the moment he is working in Cienaga, he is 24 years old, he likes a lot his profession and to help much people. My another brother is younger, he is studying in the Libre university, Industrial Engineer he is 10 semester his name is Erich and he is 20 years old.

Childhood:

I remenber when I was child most of time I was timid and quiet but when I was with my brothers and met with my cousin, my behavior changed, becouse I fought a lot with them when didn't want to play with me. When I was 5 to 7 years I played diferent sport, soccer, basketbol, beisbol and stuff like that, I only went to play when I finished the homework. At School I always was good students, sometime I won Medals of honor and my parents were congratulating me and my teacher too. I liked to go to grocery store because I bought diferent thing for me, when I did'nt find the things my mother.

6 comments:

Kelly Flórez said...

You have some mistakes in the expressions:
"i am a person friendly and smart".
The expression is "I am a friendly and smart person".
When you used present continuous, always You should used verb to be + verb + ing. For example.. "I am giving informatics solutions for small business".

Laura Solano said...

I found some mistakes in your composition:
For example: You need to use a preposition in the expression: "I'm person quiet", you sould say "I'm a quiet person" and "I'm a industrial Engineer"

mega said...

Hi bro---You have some mistakes----
capitalize : i am:I am//////he:He and "I have two brothers ,no, brother-------and She is working,no, and is working--that´s all I see.---see You

Laura Solano said...

Hi Samir.
I found one mistake in your profile. The expression "I'm twenty-five year old isn't correct. The correct expression is "I'm twenty-five years old"

Kelly Flórez said...

becouse or because ... You check

Ing. Isaith ¡¡ said...

Excellent blog Samir,...well generally you commit the same mistake,.. the nouns must start with Capital letter,... that´s all I think that you have an excellent grammar.

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