
My Name is Samir Camacho H. I'm twenty-five year old, I considerer i am a person friendly and smart. I am industrial Engineer I studied in the Libre University 8 year ago. After i studied in the Nort university, Business Logistic. I was Supervivor of production in Industrias Cannon and after Camaguey SA recruits me working like boss of werehouse where i work at the moment.
Childhood:
I remenber when I was child most of time I was timid and quiet but when I was with my brothers and met with my cousin, my behavior changed, becouse I fought a lot with them when didn't want to play with me. When I was 5 to 7 years I played diferent sport, soccer, basketbol, beisbol and stuff like that, I only went to play when I finished the homework. At School I always was good students, sometime I won Medals of honor and my parents were congratulating me and my teacher too. I liked to go to grocery store because I bought diferent thing for me, when I did'nt find the things my mother.
6 comments:
You have some mistakes in the expressions:
"i am a person friendly and smart".
The expression is "I am a friendly and smart person".
When you used present continuous, always You should used verb to be + verb + ing. For example.. "I am giving informatics solutions for small business".
I found some mistakes in your composition:
For example: You need to use a preposition in the expression: "I'm person quiet", you sould say "I'm a quiet person" and "I'm a industrial Engineer"
Hi bro---You have some mistakes----
capitalize : i am:I am//////he:He and "I have two brothers ,no, brother-------and She is working,no, and is working--that´s all I see.---see You
Hi Samir.
I found one mistake in your profile. The expression "I'm twenty-five year old isn't correct. The correct expression is "I'm twenty-five years old"
becouse or because ... You check
Excellent blog Samir,...well generally you commit the same mistake,.. the nouns must start with Capital letter,... that´s all I think that you have an excellent grammar.
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